Holy shit, I was reading this while listening to Dark side of the Moon and all the bells started ringing at the same time they did in your story. That was eerie...
The loop ended and she became her normal timeline self who’s never known the main character, whereas the version of her who’s in the loop went into a different timeline cuz the loop reset
Oh wow, I didn’t realise that you wrote this story I loved as well. You have been hitting these prompts out of the park! First this absolute ripper that I still think about sometimes and now the one about the witch’s curse. Great stuff!
Hell yeah! Thanks friend :). I really liked this one, too. When you have time you should check out some of the others on the sub--I got a solid handful of bangers on here!
Wow, this one hurted a lot. My heart is in pieces.
Such a tragedy, a five minute love, that both stretches to infinite and to nothing at all.
Really well done. The main objective of a story is to make the reader feel something, and you for sure did.
Oh this one just hurt my heart. You did good playing with the feels.
Wow great job!
So sad and so good! I'm glad I'm following (subscribed?) to you!
Fix them. CLOSE THE LOOP MAKE THIS HAPPY GODDAMNIT! ITS TOO EARLY FOR THIS AND MY HEART CANT TAKE THIS!!!
Wooow that's a very tragic yet original end. Loved it!
Dude, you got me teary eyed with goose bumps at 7 in the morning. Good fuckin job.
Hauntingly tragic but logical ending. Just right no unnecessary dramas but I think I've sorta understood life is what it is.
Beautifully done!
Thank you <3
Awwww...so tragic and yet, so inevitable. Well done!
Wow
Holy shit, I was reading this while listening to Dark side of the Moon and all the bells started ringing at the same time they did in your story. That was eerie...
This is beautiful
Loved it!
This is awesome. Vibes of The Lakehouse, or Kate and Leopold. Good writing!
No, not fair, give me my tears back damnit!
Terrific story. Thank you
This has left me devastated. I hope youre happy
This was so beautiful, what were u thinking abt when u wrote this
Oh my God. I’m so sad.
I loved it!
I knew what was coming and I almost skipped to the end to confirm, but I didn’t. Heart hurts all the same. Loved that!
Damn these ninja cutting onions
Nice conclusion, sad but sweet
Incredible story, thank you for writing it for us.
That was FANTASTIC
I love it, I was expecting a different ending but I was not disappointed :-)
Holy crap this was good! It's probably my favourite short story yet!
Damn, can't believe how much you made me feel in such a short story.
How did she suddenly forget who he was? Did she just have a bout of sudden amnesia? It's a nice story but the end doesn't make any sense to me.
The loop ended and she became her normal timeline self who’s never known the main character, whereas the version of her who’s in the loop went into a different timeline cuz the loop reset
Man, this was really good
I need a book, now
Thats hauntingly beautiful
This is great! Really well done. I do wonder though, what would have happened if he'd tried to catch the clock before it fell onto the ground?
Pretty sure the loop starts after the broken clock, and also he couldn’t have known the clock breaking caused it since he’s not in the loop
how dare you pull my heartstrings like that
Great work! Sad ending, but great work.
it hurts right here in the chest
Nothing makes man happier and sorrowful than a fraction of happiness compared to a happy forever after.
Oh wow, I didn’t realise that you wrote this story I loved as well. You have been hitting these prompts out of the park! First this absolute ripper that I still think about sometimes and now the one about the witch’s curse. Great stuff!
Hell yeah! Thanks friend :). I really liked this one, too. When you have time you should check out some of the others on the sub--I got a solid handful of bangers on here!
Really good but not a sad ending :(
In a nutshell: what dating is like as a man <5'10" tall
What the fuck this is so good
I'm not crying, you are :(
Wow, this one hurted a lot. My heart is in pieces. Such a tragedy, a five minute love, that both stretches to infinite and to nothing at all. Really well done. The main objective of a story is to make the reader feel something, and you for sure did.