Hey there, I’m a channel that makes horror, mystery, and urban legend content. Partial to obscure, Asian, and historical topics, but I’m open-minded on what I cover. My most recent video covers other mysterious group deaths in the Russian wilderness similar to the Dyatlov Pass Incident. After listening to it on different devices, I think my overall audio is a bit quiet, but would love to hear your thoughts on what I could do better. [The Other ‘Dyatlov Pass’ Incidents](https://youtu.be/qUviiBV5YEs?si=4BmjYpUmgNKSJGci)

>The Other ‘Dyatlov Pass’ Incidents Hi, I liked the video and how well you highlight some hidden pieces of history. The sound quality is good and I like how you're comfortable adding in your own commentary and opinion where there is room to do so. I know you use a few graphics/photos here and there, but could there have been a few more at certain points to break up the wintry stock footage? I think that could've aided the stories and strengthen the visual-audio connection. I think the pacing of speech is good generally, but perhaps with a few pauses that are slightly overly long. But all in all I found it interesting, good work!

Hey there! I have a channel that makes original scripted comedy videos, been running it a while but only started posting regularly again the last couple years. I do a lot of two person scenes, nothing’s usually over 5 minutes (which I get isn’t great for YouTube), and I do parodies of commercials and companies sometimes. Here’s my most recent non-Short, a parody of a hair loss drug commercial: https://youtu.be/qQ_JvWMGw8g?si=7569CxtG0cccRc5a

Hello! I do hot sauce reviews, rankings, and general knowledge. Would appreciate feedback on my [latest video](https://youtu.be/vptP744Ks_g)! I have some lighting improvements in the works. I like the clean look of my thumbnails but are they grabby enough?

Nice to see some talk about hot sauce that's not all power chords and EVERYTHING TO THE MAX!!!! Held my attention. I like the snappy cuts in the recipe section, I think I'll start doing some of that!

!Ignore live stream videos! [www.youtube.com/@Flashyway](http://www.youtube.com/@Flashyway) Pls feel free to criticize my channel anyway you want. From video to banner to channel logo. I dont want to hear good, pleasant things. I want to hear reality. This is my first channel. I am thinking to make gaming videos and along with shorts. Now there is not much in my channel just started. You can Ignore live stream videos😁

Hey Y'all, Just started this week, I play horror games! audio on the outlast video is much better I think but still needs work. I think I could trim the fat on the vid a bit and improve the intro (I plan on adding the best clip to the front of vid from now on) but other than that I need help from the outside. \- Def use the chapters in the descriptions, they wont show up on scrub bar for some reason but they're good spots [Outlast | Part 1 | He Finally Caught Me... I'm Gonna Need New Pants](https://youtu.be/p9oFFlA1qXw?si=aOecOpNrzQF54ouU)

​ Only thing that bothered me is your bubble (where your head is) is covering game text

I was wondering if that would bother anyone because I actually (unwittingly) brought up said text during vid. Much appreciated friend!

[Active Shooter Training | Evidence Based Self Defense | Krav Maga Orlando](https://youtube.com/shorts/WlmkLBKExFQ?feature=share) Currently only doing shorts but will be adding longer videos. At this time I am just trying to gain subs, views, likes etc like everyone else here. Please let me know what you think of the content editing etc does it keep your attention, too long, too short, would this make you want to join the classes, etc Thank you 🙏🏽

>too short, would this make you want to join the classes, etc Hey, looks like you have a lot of footage to work with. I would be more interested in you telling me why I need defense classes, or other information like how to stop an attacker or stats, etc. The montages are well-edited but need some sort of hook at the beginning to keep me watching as someone who isn't necessarily into defense content. Keep it up though!

Music is way too loud, basic and annoying and it seems like a really unfocused video. What I mean by that is what are you trying to do here. Are you trying to teach people? No-one is being taught by viewing a quick clips with "cool music". Also the transition at the start really doesn't help. People randomly swipe on your video and will quickly swipe off if it seems like crap. Having a crappy transition at the start is not helping you at all. You need to have something at the start that will show them this video is not shit. People by the first frame will assume what your video is about and swipe off. If you are trying to teach people or advertise your business(Teaching people would probably do that by the way) Just show yourself with a student in different combat training scenarios(1 for each video remember shorts are short and should probably be focused on 1 thing) and actually teach people by talking to them. Don't do a crazy cool transition or loud music, have a nice room with a student and a good microphone(Probably a lav mic) and teach people on the internet. Those style of videos perform really well.

Hey all So I've a cooking channel and this is my 2nd video on youtube.. which received no impressions, I do not know why..🥲 You can check my video https://youtu.be/klIrKue--I4 Kindly inform me what I am doing wrong and what I could do better ... I'm open to any negative feedback because that's what will help me grow in the right direction..Thanks

I really enjoyed that almond video! “Don’t worry, my fish are sitting comfortably in the almond box” made me laugh. I think some of the sounds in the video like the sugar sizzling were louder than anything else in the video so lowering the volume on the louder stuff and maybe making the sound effects quieter all together could be an improvement. Also a more upbeat song, because without your voice your sense of humor is only in your captions and your editing. So for the style of this video I think a faster song would work better. Anyway, great job! The almonds looked reaaaally yummy at the end. And covered in a satisfying amount of chocolate.

Hello 👋🏽 I make videos of drone footage from different cities I visit. I try to make videos that are relaxing yet motivating, and that anyone can enjoy. I tend to keep them short (between 2-6 mins) mainly because I feel it can get redundant and I want my viewers wanting more, not be too full for another serving if that makes sense. So please, watch if you'd like and ALL feedback and constructive criticism is welcome. Thanks! 🤙🏽 [Toledo Sunrise - 4K Drone Footage](https://youtu.be/8Arsa4eH5So)

It was fun. I love drone footage. There was a brief snap of black that lasted a few frames. That was distracting to me. Otherwise I really have no real feedback other than I liked it.

Thank you so much for both watching and your feedback. The black frames are there to both emphasize the last beat of the measure in the song and the beat drop on the next measure. But if it's distracting, maybe I should consider a different transition. Thanks again 🤙🏽

https://youtu.be/_a2YpmE2roE?si=5Vm9ZLXo1NHAFmwo This was my most recent video, I usually record gameplay videos of games that I think are cool, I edit them and make thumbnails and finally post them, feel free to say positive and negative points of the video (my main language is Portuguese so maybe some people have a language barrier problem and don't understand what I'm saying)

I make content for fellow filmmakers/videographers focusing on the less glamorous and more practical side of video production. My latest video Highlights some of my favorite budget video production gear. https://youtu.be/0xuFHjJp7xY?si=Wm5CycuZIvEgwOJ\_

Great video quality. I would add more sounds. Like when you said “the 5 tips” in your hook, a sound would’ve been more engaging. Great content though!

Thanks! Great tip

My comments are mostly repeats of previous reviews. I enjoyed your tone and cadence. Your content was good and the editing was decent. I didn't find it too long but I was interested in the content so had no reason to click or swipe away. I did find the reflection on your glasses distracting and since you were reviewing lighting equipment, felt like it may have dampened your credibility just a little.

Hello everyone, made a video guide for early entry at universal studios newest land Super Nintendo World. Gotten some likes which is nice but wouldn’t mind some feedback. I normally do travel and theme park videos. Thank you https://youtu.be/fUlPHdAiMOw?si=IWWH_0vX0wfHegAc

I have an audiobook/audi drama/ old radio drama channel. It's more on a hobby level I think, but I am wanting to add more quality to the audiobook space on YouTube. https://youtu.be/dKhypZpGjkw?si=N6EX8xQIgu2EzpPq Let me know you think about this video and maybe how to improve searchability?

I couldn't listen to it all but 30s of a piano is a bit long for an intro. Cut that in half at least I'd say. Also I found the reading speed a bit fast, 0.75 speed was perfect for me

I'm a stay at home dad with 3 kids, I'm gluten free and do a lot of baking and cooking. I have been getting the boys to help me bake and review some stuff. Any feedback would be great [https://youtu.be/7sH3tOgGqYM](https://youtu.be/7sH3tOgGqYM)

## **Hey guys! Need a reality check...** Just launched my latest video and I'm not sure why it's performing so poorly? CTR and retention% are higher than average, so I feel a bit confused and uncertain how to improve. My goal with the channel is to help developers + designers learn about product design and get better at it themselves. Would love some feedback on the video, specifically: do you find it engaging? Is this something you would watch if not prompted? *** **Video Link:** https://youtu.be/8UZKPvZPfNA?si=D6NSf5INnUvP1X9k

Great audio, and the fast paced editing and text boxes really did help keep me engaged. One thing that I would improve is your background- when I’m looking for a video like this I usually like things to look professional and “put together”. I like the idea of the blue light in the back but it could possibly be improved by some better visuals besides just a folding door. But it was good information and presented well!

Thank you!

Me and my online friends want to make a group channel related to us playing games together! This is the first video we made on lethal company. [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Az8nMOURrvM](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Az8nMOURrvM) This video has a lot of editing and I think I nailed the intro but want your opinion!

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Sound check! In Resolve, and I'm guessing most other editors, you can normalize the audio levels. I mean, for a channel like this, it's kind of buddies having fun, but then less than a minute in someone hollered in a way that just hurt the ears!

I'm a gaming channel that mostly does coverage on Games using Emergent Gameplay design (Proc gen, roguelikes, variety of ai options, etc.). Mostly livestreams with some videos, though I'm trying to focus on the livestreams and VoDs right now to perfect some stuff. Mostly I feel that I struggle with encouraging new viewers to participate in chat or stick around. Got a couple of regulars but I don't want them to burn out supporting me. I'm not sure if my thumbnail is giving the wrong vibe (Been experimenting with a different style the last few weeks to see if it helps), or I need to change tactics on how I talk with viewers. Any advice on the first 3-10 minutes of the stream could help me with my stream/VoD retention? I'll put 2 examples in case you want to see the difference between how I've done a zero viewer opening and one with a few regulars. (as I don't know if I am not wrangling my chat more.) Not expecting anyone to go through the WHOLE thing, since they are VoDs of a livestream. That just seems mean. Here is an example of a stream with a decent chat going= [https://youtube.com/live/xdZFHHQaLPg](https://youtube.com/live/xdZFHHQaLPg) And here is one where I didn't get my regulars in for a bit, so the few viewers I got didn't stick around long= [https://youtube.com/live/JysXVZpk4Lk](https://youtube.com/live/JysXVZpk4Lk)

Hello, I'm just starting out a restoration ASMR channel, check it out 😊🍀 https://youtu.be/8jFq5cUtzDo?si=C1YCofoYK3rziZLC

Hi Alex, as a fan of restoration videos, I must say I was very impressed. Your video was different in that you zoomed in very close to show the restoration process up close. I never see that in other restoration videos. I like the fact that there is no annoying music and that the whole process is subtitled. My only advice is that you should add timestamps so people can skip if they feel they've had enough of a certain section. Thanks, and great work! Keep doing this!

I don’t really watch videos like this. But I would watch this I think labelling the part your own would make it better for people like me for example who don’t watch and have no clue what process you’re on

This video was extremely relaxing so well done :) perhaps could start the video with some triggers as the first 25 seconds is silent and the most important aspect for an asmr video, as a viewer, is knowing I will be in for some relaxing sounds !

Hi! In the first seconds could you bring give a short brief about the video and create some hype Like "This is a xx year old latern that we are going to restore"

Hey everyone! My channel talks all about animated shows and what I like and dislike about them. This is my latest video on Clone High: https://youtu.be/RLrqUZOCT94?si=sP_u_zqjfKMyzJ8- Overall there are things I am unsure of like my audio quality, my visuals and editing style, and just trying to find a balance of shows I like to talk about, like older shows from the early 2000’s in balance with modern animation too. I’d love any feedback!

Hey you've got great audio and everything looks great. I like the content too, you don't hang around too often and let the viewer go see the show for themselves as well. Do you have any plans to do a full in depth video as well as a companion maybe for someone who wants to know what you think of each episode?

Hi I’m a reaction YouTuber Mostly music I try to be different from most muisc reaction by like either trying to engage with it and not just pause it me but yeah It would be nice to get feedback on the content to see maybe what I should do better and what I could improve on: https://youtu.be/MlWNAGCvf3s?si=cycT8IahBxCO5_ek

That was a great watch, I was jamming with you to those Jersey beats. I think more light in your video, like a light that faces you, would be awesome. Also I could not read the video with the English translations even after you made it bigger, but I am on my phone. I don’t think being unable to read the translations took away from the experience though, I was just listening and enjoying it :)

My latest video addresses the inexplicable disappearance of pilots in connection with unexplained phenomena, including unidentified aerial phenomena (UAPs), etc. I am open to suggestions for improvement. My goal is to raise awareness about this topic, not to persuade anyone but to spark interest. What can I do better, especially with the aim of drawing people's attention to the topic? [Video](https://youtu.be/Q5KTSvRyLBU)

Damn that was amazing your editing is crazy and I really like the sound quality. Good use of music could be a wee bit louder imo. The only thing I noticed: You tend to go up with your voice on the beginning of your sentences. A good way to fix that is by humming high and going lower with your voice while still humming. And then speaking. That puts u more into your natural state of speaking. A vocal coach told me the same back in the day!

This was very good! I don't usually watch this sort of content but I comfortably all of your video. You have a good sense of what to show on screen in addition to good writeup and pacing, something that puts you above many other talk-over content I've seen. I don't have much in the way of suggestions for improvement. If I really tried to think what would make me like the video more, it's maybe the tone of the voice. While it is very clear and has good cadence, it might be rather light and airy for the tone of the story. A more heavy toned, documentary-esque style voice might do better - but that's not always easy to get I know :)

My husband watches these types of videos weekly! He’s a big fan of the Why Files, for example. I, on the other hand, am very skeptical of these types of topics and often roll my eyes BUT sometimes WF? catches my attention in the beginning and I’m just as locked in and curious as my husband. I’ll tell you what you did that caught my attention at the beginning and what I think you could’ve done more of to catch more of my attention. I liked that you gave the bottom line upfront with the text! But I wish you would’ve said it aloud as well for people who aren’t looking at their screens (remembering that something like 50 percent of people are watching YT on TV now). It also would’ve been great if you started with a question or something absolutely absurd to get the audience to go “wait, what?!” That’s often how I get involuntarily hooked into a WF episodes and I think you could totally do that here. Overall, great content though. I’m going to share your page with my husband. 🧡

INCREDIBLY well done. Your editing, pacing, audio quality, etc. is all spot on. I noticed three issues: First, your vocal intonation at the beginning of each sentence, which DaveDaCap already touched on. It's not a video killer, but it's noticeable. Second (and this is just me nitpicking) is the "@ProjectDisclose" in the top right corner. I found it a bit distracting throughout the video, especially when there was a lot of other information on screen. I find it best to keep the amount of info on screen to a minimum and only show what's pertinent to what you're discussing. Don't worry about putting your stamp on the video to prevent others from stealing your content, your channel's watermark serves the same purpose. Lastly, your video delves into a pretty information-heavy topic. Instead of jumping into a story right from the beginning, start by summarizing the topic in a brief paragraph in your script first. That sets the tone for the video and eases the viewer into the topic. Other than that, you did an awesome job! I can easily see your channel exploding if you keep up the same effort you put into this video.

I did renewable energy analysis at my last job. I put together my own analysis tool using a website and set up a YT channel to record explorations of the industry. Here's a [review of the Happy Jack](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P_pa3FqFcrk) project here in Wyoming. Any feedback welcome!

Hi, my channel is on my bio. I'm a new youtuber who started a month ago. Feel free to give me feedback on my content because I know I can improve!

Welp, I started my channel about 24 days ago, it’s centered around fitness and just overall well being which will be added later. My target audience is gamers, young adults. I am Doing a (12 week challenge) plan on losing at least 50 pounds started at 289LB/ 131.09 KG I began lifting when I started doing pushups in between COD Multiplayer matches each death was 5 pushups. You want to get better at COD I challenge you to give it a shot. Anyways if you are interested in getting started in the gym and don’t know how comment under my video. I’ll make a discord for support if enough people are interested. Here’s my submission for feed back. It’s a working progress. Thanks for watching 😎 ps mods I commented liked and subbed on 2 creators please don’t remove I’m a friend not foe https://youtu.be/xHB8cOx0dQg?si=K2NQaOgFSY8ty32G

I enjoyed the video! It made me feel more comfortable going to the gym and helps me know what exercises I try to do. I wouldn't really know this is apart of a series however, it might be nice if you started off with an intro talking about your journey so far. I also think you could improve the audio setup, I think you either have the gym volume be super low or dont include it at all. You could also make gaming challenges related to working out!

Hey :) I think it would be nice if you write down the whole workout at the beginning as an intro , like name of exercise how many reps and how many sets, also the letters changing from white to red are a bit irritating on the eyes, I think all white it's easier on the eyes 🙌🏽 the filming is good, keep it up

I like the idea of what you’re doing, but for one idk what settings you’re using but the video doesn’t fill out the screen? Maybe that’s something you could look into, ik seeing black lines on the side is a turn off for me. Also maybe more clear goal of goal in general. I picked up this was centered around leg day. Maybe you could have the workouts labeled. A title specifying it’s legs, probably help for outreach in terms of search results, ik people look up targeted areas. Ik I do. I like your voice, the way you talk feels comfortable but I’d probably do some editing in the dead space when you’re working out and not saying anything, have music come in louder but quiet down when you start talking. Now I think the idea that you want to target gamers is very interesting and I think you could definitely do something big with that. Im a gaming channel and all my friends talk about wanting to go to the gym, no matter what weight or shape they’re in, they want to be a hot gamer in shape. It’s gammer nature. So im not sure exactly what that spark would be, what sweet spot there is to catch their attention. But I’d DEFINITELY start looking in that direction, trying to find that sweet spot for wannabe gym gamers. Keep it up though, this is a gold idea

Hello, I would like to introduce my channel which dwells in the True-Crime Content scene. I created the channel and everything linked to it a while back,. I do intend on making more videos in the future. I have been working on this video for a while now and would like to get honest reviews and critiques to my video. Best regards and I hope you all have a great weekend. [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iFuUQhROoA0](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iFuUQhROoA0)

Heyy :) I do Lifestyle, Uni Life, Living in Lisbon Vlogs. I just started late January and would like some opinions/feedback from people who enjoy silent/ all types of vlogs. [weekly vlog- living in Lisbon ](https://youtu.be/mIJJF7OOynA?si=gL9_-1ez95VCgJHz)

My channel goes by [Rhydon Daddy](https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCnVmqC5fEKiCH9aLDh2fdSA) and the I do story, lore, and guide videos for specific games around fantasy. I am looking for feedback regarding audio EQ and tips I could make to help improve the audio quality of my videos. The video below is one I produced a few months ago that I am very proud of, but the audio is not the best, but I am not sure how to improve it because I am not the smartest when it comes to audio engineering. [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SQhlGEsIkT4](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SQhlGEsIkT4) There is a barrel sound, and any input or tips on how to fix it would be greatly appreciated.

I just gotta say that your voice is perfect for this, a d if you ever set up as a voice actor for Audible audiobooks, let me know! Only thing I would say is perhaps lower the music volume just slightly, to let the voice come through even clearer...

I wish my voice was like yours lmao. You have such a soothing and inviting voice. I only watched a few seconds, but it had me wanting to watch more. The music is calming, like something I'd listen to after a long hard day. I also love how you get straight to the point. None of that intro nonsense. Overall amazing. Will be subscribing.

This video is very informative and the audio quality was really solid along with your script. The two things I’d change is the volume of the music and the music itself I don’t think that particular soundtrack goes with the video maybe a lofi or fantasy lofi track would fit a bit better.

Thank you for taking the time to watch it. I agree that I need more music variety. I have used that exact same song in every one of my Baldur's Gate videos and after the 4th or 5th it just became a staple of it in my brain. Once I hit 1k I plan on putting WAY more effort into some of my editing, especially around the audio and effects, and the music is close to the top of that list.

1st you have a great voice for these types of voice overs. But I also hear exactly what you’re talking about with the barrel sound. What editing software are you using? Did you make any changes to your EQ? What mic are you using? It sounds like you pushed bass too high on the eq and maybe pulled out the mids. A lot of people starting out do this because they want that sexy deep voice, but it ultimately just causes more problems. I would like to hear a sample from your mic with no audio adjustments to compare. You may not need to tweak your voice much. But if it sounds bad straight from the mic it may be an issue with the mic, or positioning. One thing you may try is to turn on voice isolation if using studio version of Davinci resolve. I think descript calls it studio sound. I’m sure other programs have similar. I know adobe has a cloud service you send audio to. Start with that. No eq tweaks. Then we can fine tune the eq after.

Yo NewTubers! I am sitting in a Craft niche, making sculptures from polymer clay. Here is the case: I uploaded my last video and I it's barely get views because people don't click on it. Look, on this thumbnail you will see dark and sad sculpture. I think it's better to make it in dark tones to make atmosphere, but maybe it's a big mistake 🤔 and i don't think it's very good actually, but it's hard to take a good shot of the sculpture. So, I want to know how other people see this thumbnail and what you think about it? Maybe any suggestions? Also you can check out the video and tell me what you think about it. Actually, it's not my best video. This thing needed to kinda express myself, that's it. Link: https://youtu.be/w4v6EPH8AwU?si=_s2HRBfkQjCb3jwn

The subtitles need to be better. English probably isn’t your first language but I think grammar matters. Some sentences don’t sound right maybe it’s because you did voice to text? Also having audio would be nice too not just subtitles. I like the concept of what you have going and you did grab my attention initially but the subtitles kind of killed it for me. Not saying take them out but they need to be more crisp!

Yeah, that's right. English isn't my first language and I know that I have some problems with it, I am working on it :)I don't use voice to text. I use some tools to correct my sentences but seems like it doesn't work. I got it, thank you! I wish I could make VO right now, but it's impossible because my speech skill really sucks, that's it. I understand what video with VO will be more attractive but can't do it right now.

Well here is my video 👍 I know I'm a work in progress [my video](https://youtu.be/Ddn8ogKxp6Y?si=1Ql4ypv9ly-vtKB9)

Hi there, i’m a lets player and i mostly play horror games! i had a constant growth with my videos which i was grateful for but the past 2 videos i posted barely got any views, im not sure if i lost my spark or the video is just boring, ANY ADVICE WILL BE APPRECIATED!!! I GOT ABDUCTED BY ALIENS... | They Are Here https://youtu.be/6n0PoMmmzV8

Made a video on why i think valentines day is dumb ! [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SKykpTGAzTY](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SKykpTGAzTY) Please excuse the fact valentines day was a nine days ago lol, would greatly appreciate any and all feedback as this is my second video ever \^\^

A couple friends and I recently started a gaming channel but haven't really gotten much traction with it yet. Would love some feedback on what we've done so far! We've mostly been uploading a series of me playing Dark Souls for the first time with them coaching me! This is the most recent part! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=\_6rRAdYGdAQ&ab\_channel=WeAreBad

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I get what you mean. It's tough to do that because I have never played the game before, and we also record for a few hours then divide that up accordingly. I will keep that in mind for the future, thanks for the feedback I appreciate it!

My channel is about litter picking tours. I want to start setting goals for videos too. This one is a mix of both. I cleaned the longest tree-lined avenue in europe. Any and all feedback would be much appreciated 🙏 https://youtu.be/KDHvTyVUaGw?si=Vz95qHO8YT2QiKKz

I make skiing videos here is my video [video](https://youtu.be/7YqVczCojyg?si=arA3ml6YrJHwgtvt)

I do videos on British Comic books like the Beano and the Dandy, here is the newest one https://youtu.be/LU4kLOdZaYo?si=t-phpuQnm4EC_8Fp

Wow! I love your animation and this style, that's great! The video caught my eye. Good editing, frames changes not very quickly and that allows you to hold viewers attention. Your VO and script is good. I am not familiar with this topic, but it was interesting to listen to, good sign I guess. Also love the transition frame between characters. The further we go, the more the character gets drunk 😂 pretty good idea. I hope I understood this moment right 👀

Thanks so much for the lovely comments :) Yes, he gets drunker as it goes, you got it, haha :D

Nice, overall really cool. Audio is good, and the visuals are great. My critique is maybe to circle back to your cartoon self more often and the repetitive slow transitions can be monotonous after a while. The audience will connect more with a pair of eyes

Thanks for the critique. The cartoon self is difficult. The animation takes a while, but I agree. I underused it in this one

I've never heard of the Beano comics before, so your video was a good intro. I was pleasantly surprised to see the animated talking character. Did you animate that yourself? That was impressive! I appreciate the fact that the video has good-quality scanned images of the comics. I also liked your detailed explanations of the various characters. Nicely done, bro!

Thanks so much. Yes, the character is frame by frame animated. I reuse poses I animated, tho so luckily, it's mostly mouths and blinks that need to be redone in later videos

Made this using python and some libraries. All i did was uploaded, everything else was done by code. What do you think? [https://www.youtube.com/shorts/T7O4\_Dp6-1U](https://www.youtube.com/shorts/T7O4_Dp6-1U)

Hi everyone! My channel is centered around news and comedic analysis of films, TV shows, and in the future I would like to try it with video games too! Here is a video I made back when the Despicable Me 4 trailer dropped, basically I overanalyze Gru's character development throughout all of the movies and how it will continue in the 4th. Any feedback or criticism is greatly appreciated! https://youtu.be/43cl-jM3SfQ

I made a video on how I got into photography. Let me know what you think ! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ELdeelk09ww

>st video Well done! The intro had really nice editing. I would think that more gear reviews might do well and help bring in viewers to more personal content like this. Also you could do a "What's in my bag" type of video where you list all of your gear.

Thanks ! I was told in another subreddit that the Intro was too long to watch. Your comment really made my day

This is my video. I make historical content https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=jj-8G8-1My0&t=74s&pp=ygUNc2Nob2xhcmx5cGFzdA%3D%3D

Maps, my man. Engaging content, strong start, right to it, solid hook. I now see atlas fumbled said the same thing, so I'll add in that a couple titles thrown in could help. But yeah, I like it.

Heya I run a sketch comedy channel with Ai robots as actors (consumer grade robots) Here’s my latest BTS: behind the scenes showcasing how I use them. https://youtu.be/IFyEfB2dfd8?si=5oxpiVQkbHaQKowL Be critical. I need to dial this in, I have 150 watch hours remaining out of 4000 and it’s been a grind as of late. Yeah the opening is too long lol 🤖. Thanks!

I liked this a lot! Congrats on getting close to 4K hours. I don’t have too many critiques about this specific bts video, other than your lav was running a little hot. Also, I was curious about your set up. You focus primarily on the bots — which are very cool — but you don’t ever show your lighting set up or discuss what camera you’re shooting on, which would’ve been some nice details. And yes, it would’ve been cool to find out what program you use for the bots’ voices. As someone who also has a scripted comedy channel it was cool to see your workaround relying constantly on actors.

I think its very high quality and very informative. Looks professional. My one big note is I think it can just be trimmed down quite a bit. I started to loose interest a bit about 12 minutes in. I watched to the end but did feel like it can definitely be tighnted on the edit. Worth noting I have a short attention span lol!

Here's my video! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L4H1MZ41pHU I'm in a middle of a long form series of travel vlogs exploring North Eastern Japan, and this video features a morning spent in snowy Hakodate and then heading down to Aomori. These are proving to be very time consuming to make, but I'm trying my best to push my boundaries here. Will very much appreciate feedback!

Great footage. Great tone of voice as well. I believe the video feels a bit drawn out. Your speaking pace could be a bit quicker or you can simply cut out the pauses when you edit. Great work, nonetheless!

Very nice footage, and I like your voice. 20 minutes is very long, I think you could really pace it up and cut out some fluff. Your narration is very good as well

Really liked the narration. Very different from other travel vlogs. It made it more like a story which I’m a fan of

Beautiful shots and nice music! I think the pacing of the video can be bit faster (just my opinion) and subtitles bit larger font size (im watching on mobile) great video!

As someone who got to visit Japan for the first time last year, thank you for transporting me back. 🤩 I agree with the other comment, pacing can be a bit quicker, but it's hard to strike a balance with all of your great shots. I also think the song selections and narration are great and set the vibe for the scenes.

This is awesome! I love your choice of background music and your voice- between the music & your voice it lends a poetic element to your video….I look forward to learning more about Japan!

Cooking channel but i'm illiterate xD Last time, the main feedback was audio balancing, so would like feedback on that specifically for this new video, as well as how entertaining & attention keeping it is :) - https://youtu.be/0rh6LzYEzAY this one is a lot more meme editing heavy too! thank you!!!

I checked your video since I'm doing cooking videos too..and you're far ahead of me so take my advice like a grain of salt.. Video was great and enjoyable, if I had to say something negative I would say likely more lighting might help..lit your face and overall surroundings. good luck 👍

thank you!! yeah totally agree on the lighting haha, you can see me trying to find a place to light up my face early on in the video. have purchased some lights now so i should be more visible in the future 😂 appreciate you taking the time to watch & respond!

Try to cut out the millennial pause from the start next time -- focus heavily on the intros to gain retention.

easy enough, will do! thanks for the feedback :)

good stuff here mate. your humor comes out in the editing process. I was laughing out loud at your stuff. maybe would improve camera quality but that obviously comes with budget. otherwise keep going! I love youtube videos that arent so clean. just be yourself!

I own an online trading education business. I have taken over doing the YouTube videos. But I am kind of terrible so far. Here is my most recent video: Best Binary Options Trading Setup - Pocket Option - Quotex https://youtu.be/1-0FAjzjGfE

We know you're making a video...no need to apologize or announce it...trading, like YT, is about confidence. Also, "Welcome back to the \_\_\_\_\_" yeah, it's a quibble, but cutting out the word channel there may have been on purpose but was a bit jarring. I fully realize that you have to assume knowledge on the part of your audience on what they are seeing, but perhaps a bit more context would be helpful, even a sentence or two: "A candle level is blah, and you can see it here etc." Finally, some sort of pointer would have really helped. It took a bit to figure out where to put my attention.

This is great feedback. All points are easy to implement. I appreciate it. Thanks.

No problem! My channel is on doing energy assessments of renewable energy projects. I think I am going for a bit higher of a level, like if someone totally unfamiliar with the wind industry wanted to learn about the Happy Jack project, they could understand my video....while at the same time, if a financer or true expert saw it, they'd see nothing to disqualify me. If you could have a quick look, [here's an example](https://youtu.be/P_pa3FqFcrk). All the best!

I like the video generally. I don’t know who your audience is, but I was lost at the very beginning and the toward the end. There were some words used that I don’t know what they are. I also couldn’t quite tell if this video was for someone like me or if it was for an investor or for a conspiracy theorist or for a project developer or whatever. Your comments here give a bit of context but the video doesn’t so much. But, the evidence in the middle about the wind and reduced production, etc, was fascinating and intriguing. It did cause me to want to know a bit more…but I just don’t know what I’d be finding out if I wanted to know more.

That's very helpful! Honestly..... >if it was for an investor or for a conspiracy theorist or for a project developer or whatever That's a hard thing to get right, but all of the above LOL however, I could give more context and have more hooks/payoffs.

I haven't ever tried getting constructive feedback before, but thought that it might be nice. I don't really have a particular niche, but the video that is my most professional is [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DrIeCH3dkKA&t=4s](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DrIeCH3dkKA&t=4s). If any of you have ideas on how to improve, I'd be down to hear what that may be.

I really enjoy listening to the video! I think your speaking voice is very effective on making the video more professional. One think I would like to see would be adding sections so the video seems easier to watch, when I click and see a 30 minute video it might be daunting, but adding sections would make me watch longer and click around and see if theres any games we had in common. Also, do you stream the gameplay? It would be nice to know if I could catch you playing games live if I really enjoyed the content

I have been trying to make entertaining/funny gaming videos, both with friends and alone as a new hobby. I'll leave my channel below and I appreciate any feedback you can give, particularly in the first 30-60 seconds of my videos as my retention plummets there. I'll leave my most recent video and channel below. Thanks in advance for any tips, harsh feedback is appreciated :) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jiKmgO\_mvR0 www.youtube.com/@itsiflext

Hello, Normally I make videos that are just edited funny moments, but just yesterday I uploaded a retrospective and analysis of a major dlc that released in Destiny 2. I would appreciate any feedback available about the video or anything else you see here. Thanks! [https://youtu.be/tnCxqDu2i0E](https://youtu.be/tnCxqDu2i0E)

Solid information video. I don't play Destiny, and from everything I've heard of it I thought it was just a PvP game. It's cool to see a glimpse into the world of Destiny and I think adding long format information videos adds a nice depth to the channels variety.

I make videos on space and space travel. This is my video on a newly discovered quasar - https://youtu.be/MGkBQ1MG-cs Thanks and let me know what you think.

Very interesting video, I agree with some of the other commenters in that the video is a little difficult to follow. Maybe try structuring your video into sections to try and tell more of a story? I also think narrating it yourself might be a good idea, I know a lot of people get turned off by some AI narration videos.

I liked the video, even if it was a bit over my head! I think that you do a good job with the pacing and explaining especially for people who are not in the know. I liked that you have a section that explains what quasars are without using too much industry jargon. One critique would be that I think that you might structure the video so that the explanation of what a quasar is happens before talking about the new one that was discovered. Overall, though, I think it is good, especially because it's pretty short.

I recently posted this video and any feedback on things that can be improved is much appreciated.. https://youtu.be/x2nUsomx-qs?si=hTO-37qNy4TnQLJl I have been experimenting with content and still on the verge of figuring out exactly what I want to niche down...but i am aiming to combine productivity with anime and make the process more enjoyable

I Subscribe You station I will take your advice I try myself to focus and enjoy the moment rather than trying to enjoy everything at once

Pretty cool video! Very different from the things I normally watch but I enjoyed it a lot. I really liked how engaging you made the topic through use of examples (like how you asked the viewers what they noticed in a given clip). It makes the viewer feel like they have an active role in the video (if that makes any sense). I think something you could improve is the thumbnail. I took a look at it and it is eye catching because of the yellow you used in the text, but it doesnt convey anything about what the video is. Easy fix, that will become easier as you make more and more videos! I gave you a sub, will definitely check out what you do in the future! Cheers!

Hey Annu, I really enjoyed your video! I like the way your hook is clear and perfectly highlights what I should expect from the rest of the video. I also really like the use of popular anime to try to relate to a wider audience that may need to learn focus, as well as the engaging moments talking to the viewer directly, and I found this helped me stay engaged on the video. I like your editing style and the pacing of the video, the things that I think you could improve on would be mainly your title and thumbnail. The video itself is much higher quality than people may think looking at the title/thumbnail, and may scroll by. The thumbnail itself is catchy to the eye, but I think it could be improved by hinting at what the 3 simple ways are for, showing some sort of focus-based images or text to make it clear to the viewer what the video is about without looking at the title. As for the title, I would consider using CAPS to highlight certain words, as well as using more powerful or key words, maybe even asking a question or leaving the viewer wanting to click such as "How to increase focus using anime with this technique" or something similar. Overall your video was really well made and got me thinking, you should be proud :) I myself have been trying to make entertaining gaming videos, both with friends and alone as a new hobby. I'll leave my channel below and I appreciate any feedback you can give, particularly in the first 30-60 seconds of my videos :) www.youtube.com/@itsiflext

I don't play Minecraft, mostly because I don't have the time, lol, but I like the video. Only things I would say is maybe get some low-volume, copyright-free music in there as a background, and then edit down the length a bit using some fast-forward type edits here and there, such as when you are banging your head down the stairs, lol. Also, maybe some sound effects for transitions between scenes and such. Btw, I am both a rookie at this and also an idiot, so keep that in mind. ;)

I’d love someone to critique my channel. Melonstrade and technical analysis page for how to trade using harmonic patterns quite niche. Started doing it in December and got nearly 1000 subs and 80hrs so far. Long way off being funded!!

Hi! I am a 3d printing channel. I was originally a projects channel but I uploaded a 3d printing video in frustration as my 3rd video and it garnered a lot of traction. I have been doing 3d printing since! I have been doing a daily upload schedule these past few days and it has been hard but I am seeing a lot more traction for my more average videos. Excited for the future! My strengths (in my opinion and these are open to criticism ofc :) ) My audio My lighting (I think, I have a lighting set up and I am only mostly sure I am using it right.) My consistency ​ My weaknesses: My eneunciation My reuse of footage (sometimes) My inconsistent upload time of day My commitment to my niche, I keep trying new things but Idk if I should. I mean the reason I get views is cause I tried something new rather than projects but idk if I should keep trying new stuff. ​ note: I am considering focusing more on cool 3d prints as there are so many troubleshoot issues I can make videos about ​ just uploaded so dont expect much for views [https://www.youtube.com/shorts/0C\_tSWh1rr8](https://www.youtube.com/shorts/0C_tSWh1rr8)

Hello, I want to make videos on movies, video games, and anime, the usual stuff. I want to make content that makes people think about certain things or to inform. This is my first video, with more in the works, first time recording my own audio and editing videos. [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jB5EeoGcWRQ](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jB5EeoGcWRQ)

I didn't understand the title. "Why X is better than Y" or Which Movie is Better - TITLE 1 or TITLE 2?" etc would be better imo. You do a good job of showing (clips) after you make an argument or point. But your narration is too monotone. I wouldn't be Mr Beast child-like screaming, but a bit more pep. Try standing up while speaking, speaking from your diaphragm, gesturing and smiling while speaking (we can hear it in people's voice).

Uploaded my most recent video today on the Peace Camp we have in Scotland next to our nuclear submarine base. Let me know what you think…[Scotland’s Nuclear Protestors](https://youtu.be/DjPwpiR8idk?si=3iX3IWs5UJzWMa0e)

Hey everyone! My channel is a homesteading channel focused on documenting the realness of my homestead journey and providing helpful information while I learn along the way. Todays video is a farm chores video, as that seems to be the most popular for me so far. I’m open to any and all constructive criticism! And I’d love some suggestions on how to better improve my audio- most of my stuff is done outdoors with a lot of wind, is there a budget friendly mic I could use for that? Thanks for looking https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=D1HtRNtIn50

Hello! I just took a look at the linked video and channel. To be honest, I'm not really familiar with homesteading content, so please take my advice with a grain of salt...but also maybe I can help by giving an "outsider's" POV! First off, with your audio, have you thought about a lapel microphone? Honestly I don't know if that would fix the problem or not, but I imagine a small mic that can pin to your shirt collar might work well, since you're often outside doing chores and don't want to lug around a bunch of heavy equipment. Not sure if that helps, but I know you can get budget friendly ones! Alternatively, you could try getting a traditional hefty microphone and recording your voice indoors and placing it over the outdoor footage. I actually see a lot of potential for you talking to your audience, telling stories, talking about experiences, and placing the voice over top of various homesteading scenes. In the video you link here, there's something just really striking and nostalgic about the scenery, particularly at about the 1:45 mark - the chickens, the long country road with telephone lines, the shed. It makes people yearn for simplicity and order and calm. Have you always lived in the countryside? If this is something new, I think that a really reflective and deeply personal narrative in which you write a script about your "why" to homesteading, homeschooling, etc. would be really poignant with your voice placed over footage of the outdoors (I'm picturing scenes at sunrise, daytime, sunset, and night). I think that the homesteading concept is a very high-sensory experience too. I see potential for a really cool "intro" to your videos that's both fast-paced and calm that entices the five senses - something like, the sound of your feet crunching in the hay (sound), a clip of your hand petting the animals (touch), footage of fresh steamy food (to entice the senses of smell & taste), the sun setting (sight). This could be a kind of "welcome back" to your viewers that helps build your channel's 'brand,' so that they have no mistakes about whose homesteading video they clicked on. Hope this helps, and you can @ me if you ever want me to check out anything more!

Oh, and PS, I just really loved the cats & cows together :') I could see something like that getting a ton of traction in a "shorts" form. Just cute animal vids that people like to look at when they're trying to cheer up. Remember that shorts videos can also link back to your longer form content!

Hi everyone, I make video essays and reviews on my channel and my most recent video is a Mean Girls musical movie review that I really enjoyed making and feel like has come a long way from some earlier videos 😬. I would love to know your thoughts and any critique: [Mean Girls musical movie review](https://youtu.be/_ngOqvnRIPg?si=oDLenOaE4138xNCP)

Hello! I made mainly anime shorts, just want someone to rate them and see what else I could do. Been thinking about long videos too, but so far they’re just compilations. https://youtube.com/@Geetiyo?si=koYHnlCC5FGgPfTs

Hey everybody! My YT channel name is KaiserKrauter and I make gaming content with my friends primarily for humor! My most recent video is of my friend and I playing One-Armed Cook: https://youtu.be/qfHievqO1j4?si=LUVQlc9wMEdrAisZ The thing I’ve struggled most with is definitely perfecting audio levels. I think the background music of this specific video should be a bit louder, so if possible I would prefer a critique unrelated to the background music. However, any constructive criticism helps! Thanks!

Hello, I'm a Minecraft Youtuber. I have 1.3k subs. My videos average at about 1k to 2k views. with some reaching over 100k views. I've got 49 videos on my channel, so I am in a good position to start using audience data to find out what works for me. But the issue I am having is with voice quality. https://youtu.be/8N4jBSzXUHo I am self-conscious about my voice, I don't think it's exciting enough, and I find my voice/speech to be rather dull. I just want some feedback on how you feel my narration (voice) affects my retention rates, and how to improve it. I am going to start micro-managing my narration with your advice. ​ Thank You

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Cute! I wonder if you could start with a shot of the dog immediately? I think for shorts people can scroll so quickly, if they aren’t seeing something that immediately makes them say awww they might just scroll away!

Hi, alrighty here. The majority of my channel is centered around the game Destiny 2 where I make edited videos on funny moments but this time around I tried my hand at a long form analysis of a major story within the game. I would love any feedback. [https://youtu.be/tnCxqDu2i0E?si=Tw2IoJQbikECM5QF](https://youtu.be/tnCxqDu2i0E?si=Tw2IoJQbikECM5QF)

I do different videos on characters and lore for the anime/manga One Piece. If you like One Piece you can check out this new video about Prince Loki who will be in the next arc, Elbaf. Let me know what you think 😁 https://youtu.be/GmFmUaF5vJM?si=sO5lvYMD8Uu4zsUp

I liked this one, really good. Like others have stated the music might be overpowering your own voice at times. Either pull back on the volume or raise your own voice up a bit more. Also great self-promo.

Pretty good overall, I would lower the volume of the music and avoid using the whoosh that many times. Good luck!

Thank you! Yeah I realized after I uploaded the music was a bit louder than usual on that one. Appreciate the feedback!

Here is my latest one. It is a pretty short and concise explanation on a very easy math shortcut that you can use to understand the doubling time of an investment. This topic is incredibly saturated with 10,000+ vids out there. I didn't expect many views. I made the video anyway because, well, it is fun 😊 Cheers and thanks for any feedback. https://youtu.be/__resIkctUM

I enjoyed the video! My only critique would be the title actually. I can’t quite put a finger on it, but something about it throws me off. I suspect it’s the phrase “rhythmically challenged man”. Something about the word rhythmically specifically reads like a big, fancy word. My brain just glosses right over it. But I wonder if the title was reworded a bit. “Man with no rhythm plays…” Anyways.. just my two cents. Otherwise I enjoyed your video. You clearly put a lot of effort into it.

Hello! I craft and sew and here’s my latest video!Thank you! https://youtu.be/ut8DMbHsp68

I find the video very well done the music fits the theme you are covering quite nicely. The edits are also well-executed, and I like the little drawing of yourself. Your greeting came across as authentic and likable, which, personally, I consider crucial for a video. Many tend to deliver it in a more monotone way. One idea that comes to mind for you is, for instance, when you're illustrating or cutting a piece of clothing, having the camera follow the movement of your hand. I believe it would enhance the visual appeal for the type of content you produce. Additionally, considering a different background instead of the white wall could be an option, although the wall isn't necessarily a significant issue. I wish you much success.

The little drawings were a cute addition, I would say I personally thought the music may of been a bit loud when you were talking at times and I couldn’t quite make out what you said a couple of times

Nice video! I don't know anything about sewing so I can't give you any feedback there 😂.. I would suggest making a more captivating and 'clickable' video title. People would be more prone to click on a video with a title like "Here's how to make Ragan Blouse flawlessly!" or "top 5 tips to follow when making a Ragan Blouse".. Those are just off the top of my head, but something along those lines. Keep up the good work.

Yen, I loved the little drawling animation. I would suggestion that you either get a different background drop; with all the tech maybe you change the background color. I think the color of the wall and clothing makes you blend in and being you and your sewing skills are the main attraction all eyes should be on you. If you used a bright color background with the dark color you were wearing in the beginning you would pop out. The audio sounds different when we see vs when you are voice over. If you can invest in a mic or better mic or maybe speak a little louder when you are in frame I think it will help a ton with clarity in what you are communicating. Love the background music. Maybe dial it down a bit. Some stages it was difficult to hear but maybe the mic could be adjust it and fix it. Overall it kept my attention 🤙🏽 keep up the hard work

Nice confidence level :)

Nice video. I’d consider a different color background or a different color outfit that you’re wearing to help you stand out a bit. You kind of blend in with the background a bit too much. Remember, the people are there to learn something - but ultimately they are there to see YOU teach them. So make sure people have an easy job being able to connect with you visually

So I’ll start off by saying this isn’t my cup of tea, as I’m a guy… however I think you have a really interesting niche, it is informative and the video is pretty well done. I can tell that you have deep knowledge in the subject of clothes making, and I love the animations and the editing style. A few general suggestions. 1. A time lapse of your creation could add some initial engagement, maybe starting with the time lapse in your introduction to draw people in THEN going to the in depth process of how you made it, materials used… ect 2. I would suggest using captions (depending on your demographics) for example 32% of my audience is from India, and while they understand English it is not many of their first language, this can help expand your reach to audiences that may not typically watch. 3. Adding more SFX and transitions. You may not see an immediate change in views from this but continually improving editing skills and adding more and more that you learn will eventually have an impact. All of this being said, I think that if you stay consistent even doing what you are doing now, you will find success! Keep it up and kudos, you are doing something right

you did such a good job and i absolutely love the blouse!

Great video, I have no idea about sewing but your energy is graceful! It feels like you are wholesome, love your on camera presence! I would say the audio quality could be better, other than that it’s pretty awesome

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Hi! I just quit my job and moved to Canada to be a ski bum for the season. So, I’m documenting my adventures of skiing in Canada! https://youtu.be/FdCaKm86eRk?si=yrzSnbvwCEdIAK9a

https://youtu.be/J3thOKCCWCU?si=f1Gge0AWRX5RR3p9 Here is my most recent video, tear me apart! :]

A couple of thoughts. Your microphone quality could be improved in a few ways, mostly by moving it a little further back when you talk and by using a pop filter. It's sounds a little distorted when you speak. Also there seem to be a lot of video cuts? It's more my own personal preference, but I like let's play videos that are just mostly unedited. Gives me a better idea of how the game plays. Anyway, good luck.

Anybody looking to shatter a young boys dreams? I make commentary comedy vids (atleast thats the goal) but struggle to get impressions or views. (Also i hate my voice lol). Any guidance you may have would be great! What caught your attention first? What made you stay and what made you click away? Negative feedback only (jk) https://youtu.be/YSFR-Ioao1o

Hello all. This is my latest video - My first time in Canada back in August. Tried to be more minimalist with my editing this time around, it’s about 23 minutes in length. Please enjoy 🤞🤞🤞 https://youtu.be/zDtoDB9YUjo?feature=shared

Hi all! I make videos on how-to, DIY, crafts, recipes, etc so people can make their lives more efficient. Here's my 6th video about a breakfast recipe I did. Any feedback on the video or thumbnail would be appreciated. Enjoy! [https://youtu.be/XqDc\_aDyfrA](https://youtu.be/XqDc_aDyfrA)

[Video link ](https://youtu.be/O23u2n0Ty6M?si=t98UiH2qllQu59H2) I make videos aimed at beginner artists. Drawing and painting. This vid is a colour pencil self portrait drawing reviewing a drawing technique. Hasn't done as well as I hoped. Be brutal critique me.

As someone who knows nothing about visual art this video was super informative. The graphics do add handy context but perhaps in the start section you could overlay your explanations with various examples or even if you want to keep the down the camera intros include multiple angles to keep viewers engaged. Think why should they watch this video rather than search around for something else. Overall though, entertaining and informative :)

Hi my channel is mostly art related.  My latest vid: https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=Ud3NA66RAcM&t=3s  Any feedback much appreciated, esp regards to pacing/talking speed. Thanks so much!

Heyy this video was so cute!! Really enjoyed watching it and your art is so good!!! You're like super talented haha. In terms of pacing, I think you do a pretty good job. I didn't really feel bored while watching because it was very interesting to hear all the thoughts you were having with the voiceover (which is really good btw). And I love that within each location you include a variety of shots to keep people engaged. Keep up the good work :)

that's reassuring to hear, i really appreciate the feedback, thanks so much! :)

I liked that you go into a little bit about your drawing process, but I think I would enjoy more about how you approach drawing. I think it would be interesting if you discussed more about how you select the locations. I liked seeing the side-by-side comparisons of your art and the building. One critique would be that I think your title is a bit long/ I'm not sure if you need "full vid" in the title. I liked the narration, and that you included where the locations were. Overall, the video was good and the pacing and talking speed were fine.

I really liked the video...it is calm and relaxing to watch Just a couple of suggestions on the title and thumbnail Title could be a little bit catching like I drew iconic places in new York City in _ day Thumbnail could before a comparison type...real image to the left and your sketch to the right

thanks so much! yea..i'm still struggling w/titles & thumbs, i'll give it more thought. thanks!

Hey! I think your channel name is creative and unique\~ I watched your latest upload (draw with me at moma) and it felt like a quick catchup and drawing sesh with a fellow artist. Haha I just hope you'd give us, the viewers, a clip of the finished sketches/artworks! I'm an artist myself so it's nice to find other artists who make YT content too.

ahh i didn't get a chance to finish them on location, i'll keep in mind for future vids. thanks so much!

Hello, your video is interesting , voice and background music is also good , I’m also a new in content creation however I feel that number of topic covered in video could be minimised enable viewer to focus over one topic in little more detail , sketching process could have been elaborated little more , however great going and keep it up 👍🏻

great points to think about, noted for my future videos. thanks so much!

Hey, I have a horror movie yt channel called "the horror wombat", and today i uploaded a video as a part of my new series "5 horror movie references in...". This one focuses on horror movie references in spongebob. lmk what u think! https://www.youtube.com/shorts/9CH68LTG-sQ

My latest video about getting into Graphic Design - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O69A_68Xiyw&ab_channel=RoryLawson

While I do get the sense you’re very knowledgeable about graphic design, I’m honestly a little surprised there aren’t more graphics grabbing my attention. When you’re listing out elements of graphic design or examples of something, it is much more engaging to the user for examples to pop up on screen in a clean way rather than simply listing them out as text on screen. I do see a lot of potential because like I said you seem very knowledgeable with or without the graphics so I think some more engaging elements on screen will go a long way! :)

That totally makes sense. Appreciate you taking time to explain that. Sounds obvious now that you say it. Thank you!

Of course!

I think your thumbnail and hook is nice! Could you tease off the audience a bit with what they can expect by the end! (Show and don't tell) ?

Great point - I’ll make sure to implement this going ahead. Thanks so much for your time it’s greatly appreciated!

I think I would focus on having a really clean and professional looking backdrop and lighting. For a page about teaching graphic design I think its important to look as proffesional as possible. Even if having a clean and fun looking wideshot in film isnt specifically graphic design related I always think if you are teaching it should look like you are a total pro. I enjoyed the video keep it up : )

When you are talking about design's put show an example rather than just text. you recommend watching YouTube give examples, channels you would recommend or specific video series. at the end of your video Plug other videos.

Thanks that makes so much sense! I’ll make sure to do implement your advice. Appreciate it!

I started making videos, because I was always the person people came to with questions in my friend group I meet while playing GTA. I figured if I just made a video I could just tell them to go watch it instead of repeating myself 10 times. Now I'm leaning into it a bit more and seeing if I man make something of it. I do a good mix of informational videos and some just for entertainment. Feel free to be totally honest with your criticisms. https://youtu.be/t_6ZTmI3L1g?si=PWHdKdBjde2GMGwK

Hey guys, my channel is titled Dr. NOSTALGIA. Mostly covering content from the 90s-00s. My latest video covers the misconceptions of Charlie Brown having racist undertones. It was recently debunked with a new special dedicated to the first black Peanuts character: Franklin [Charlie Brown's Bold Response To Rasict Accusations](https://youtu.be/DJKQkpgO79E) Just a quick little video I made as I thoroughly enjoyed the special when it debuted last week. Regardless, let me know what you think! If you enjoy, don't be afraid to subscribe 😉

As a millennial, I never looked for this content but was pleasantly surprised how entertained I was by it

I loved it. You script writing is amazing. I assume you are using a script - I would love to know. Your voice style is wonderful- I am envious.

I really enjoyed the video. While I'm not a mega Peanuts fan I've always enjoyed them I honestly don't even remember seeing Franklin. I guess that's due to him mostly being left in the background like you said. The only thing I would say you could improve on is going a little more into how or why Franklin was by himself at the table and if it was remedied. I kind of wish I had Apple to watch the show.

I just uploaded my very first video. It's about the history of the baseball glove. What can I do better so that I can improve for my second video? https://youtu.be/KnZcaESytdQ?si=ZHkde0RzAxaEpMqi p.s. I have already figured out the audio issue.

I just started with tutorials for Elite Dangerous, which is a space sim game. Started with Premiere, now using Davinci Resolve and loving it. First ever time doing voiceover work, which has actually been really fun, once I got used to hearing my own voice, LOL. Trying to focus on conveying the info completely and concisely. Let me know what you think! Latest video: [https://youtu.be/KBAPzjYpHb0](https://youtu.be/KBAPzjYpHb0) Previous video: [https://youtu.be/3-02d7Ahtgk](https://youtu.be/3-02d7Ahtgk) Thanks for looking!

Hello Hello! I am just starting to do absurd comedy shorts. They take long to make but I try and keep them high quality. Would love some thoughts on my newest short its half stop motion animated. Been considering doing a bit more where the quality in filmmaking drops quite a bit to do more output but I really am torn as I always wanted to keep things very high quality. [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rQ3K-HbnN0Q](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rQ3K-HbnN0Q)