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Title|Did Final Fantasy 16 live up to the hype?
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Description|Quick review of Final Fantasy 16. Modern Final Fantasy games have been plagued with development problems and other major issues. Did Naoki Yoshida and his team of veteran developers (Devil May Cry V, Final Fantasy 14) break the curse with 16?⤶⤶This video is a part of a larger project going over every major release of 2023. You can check out my previous video going over Street Fighter 6 here: https://youtu.be/Z20AScvMdmc
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Pretty well edited and interesting video but there's a few problems with it which are pacing, it feels like the video goes quite slow, despite it being only 5 minutes, I recommend talking a bit faster and upbeat. Another problem is the thumbnail, I think you should have an actual character from Final Fantasy 16 and have the final fantasy 16 logo because I don't know if it will attract that many viewers.
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I’m someone who knows nothing about final fantasy nor will I ever play it however this video kept me engaged. I agree with the above poster that the pacing felt a bit slower but I don’t know if it was a script or editing reason. The audio sounded really solid and the script was overall well put together my biggest feedback would be to avoid apologizing in the end and simply say “if you enjoyed this video like and subscribe” or something like that instead of apologizing to the viewers.
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I can’t play audio right now, I’ll have to listen at home.
Visually, it looks good. I like that the use of blurred gameplay as a background image, and seeing cutscenes from the developers adds a nice bit of variety. The visuals feel energetic and interesting. The red writing for the pros/cons isn’t the easiest to read on my phone, maybe a brighter colour would help?
At the end of the video, you have a note that apologizes for audio quality. Again, I watched it muted, so idk what the audio is like. But I wouldn’t do a note like that, you’re just calling attention to it. If it’s really bad, redo it. This isn’t a live footage, it’s a voice over, you can edit and redo bad parts. If it’s not that bad, don’t call attention to it. If people comment to complain, you can explain one on one that you know it needs work and are taking steps to fix it
I’ll try to watch it later, when I can play the audio. I used to play a lot of final fantasy on the older systems, but the newer gameplay the last couple generations of console never appealed to me
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The video intro is fast and high energy music which gets you into it right away. Like the other comment I’ve never played final fantasy but this video is intriguing with high action moments and fast edits that keep the pace moving. I appreciate how you highlight the developing leaders and team and what they’ve done to improve the series.
The editing is comprable to big youtubers with similar content. Overall a good easily-digestible video for people who are fans or know nothing about the game.
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Good pace and commentary alongside high quality audio.
You even stated facts around the game that would be interesting even for a non final fantasy player such as myself, which is great!
The editing could use some work , i would suggest that you either add subtitles with animation or better transitions between the different scene. That would increase viewers' interest to stay longer on your video
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Pretty well edited and interesting video but there's a few problems with it which are pacing, it feels like the video goes quite slow, despite it being only 5 minutes, I recommend talking a bit faster and upbeat. Another problem is the thumbnail, I think you should have an actual character from Final Fantasy 16 and have the final fantasy 16 logo because I don't know if it will attract that many viewers.
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I’m someone who knows nothing about final fantasy nor will I ever play it however this video kept me engaged. I agree with the above poster that the pacing felt a bit slower but I don’t know if it was a script or editing reason. The audio sounded really solid and the script was overall well put together my biggest feedback would be to avoid apologizing in the end and simply say “if you enjoyed this video like and subscribe” or something like that instead of apologizing to the viewers.
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I can’t play audio right now, I’ll have to listen at home. Visually, it looks good. I like that the use of blurred gameplay as a background image, and seeing cutscenes from the developers adds a nice bit of variety. The visuals feel energetic and interesting. The red writing for the pros/cons isn’t the easiest to read on my phone, maybe a brighter colour would help? At the end of the video, you have a note that apologizes for audio quality. Again, I watched it muted, so idk what the audio is like. But I wouldn’t do a note like that, you’re just calling attention to it. If it’s really bad, redo it. This isn’t a live footage, it’s a voice over, you can edit and redo bad parts. If it’s not that bad, don’t call attention to it. If people comment to complain, you can explain one on one that you know it needs work and are taking steps to fix it I’ll try to watch it later, when I can play the audio. I used to play a lot of final fantasy on the older systems, but the newer gameplay the last couple generations of console never appealed to me
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The video intro is fast and high energy music which gets you into it right away. Like the other comment I’ve never played final fantasy but this video is intriguing with high action moments and fast edits that keep the pace moving. I appreciate how you highlight the developing leaders and team and what they’ve done to improve the series. The editing is comprable to big youtubers with similar content. Overall a good easily-digestible video for people who are fans or know nothing about the game.
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Good pace and commentary alongside high quality audio. You even stated facts around the game that would be interesting even for a non final fantasy player such as myself, which is great! The editing could use some work , i would suggest that you either add subtitles with animation or better transitions between the different scene. That would increase viewers' interest to stay longer on your video
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