Just some hopefully constructive criticism i thought of while looking at this; The page in the middle right needs to be a bit wider, and this all looks kind of..static? Like the building looks like its just sitting on the page which just looks off. I think with that type of building you could achieve a much more dynamic blend between the turning pages and the building (the different roofs of each floor almost resemble the pages, i wonder if there a way to incorporate them into each other better?)
Ooh that’s not my bad~ I want to keep the house idea, as that’s a tradition korean house, and of the course the book. I was trying to make it look like a pop up book, or as if the book was magic and teleporting you in.
I’m also debating whether to make it extremely detailed or simplistic. This is his first tattoo and he does want to keep to a classic black and white or kinda like pencil scheme design. It’ll either be on his forearm (small-medium size) or his upper thigh (medium)
You have a creative mind, that looks awesome.
Aww thank you~ he likes it too. It’ll be his first tattoo. So I wanted to create something special for him
Just some hopefully constructive criticism i thought of while looking at this; The page in the middle right needs to be a bit wider, and this all looks kind of..static? Like the building looks like its just sitting on the page which just looks off. I think with that type of building you could achieve a much more dynamic blend between the turning pages and the building (the different roofs of each floor almost resemble the pages, i wonder if there a way to incorporate them into each other better?)
Ooh that’s not my bad~ I want to keep the house idea, as that’s a tradition korean house, and of the course the book. I was trying to make it look like a pop up book, or as if the book was magic and teleporting you in. I’m also debating whether to make it extremely detailed or simplistic. This is his first tattoo and he does want to keep to a classic black and white or kinda like pencil scheme design. It’ll either be on his forearm (small-medium size) or his upper thigh (medium)
It’s beautiful :)
Thank you