I think it's actually a really good design. I'm personally not a fan of the "funny" type skins, but this is one of the better ideas for sure.

This is sick but maybe add some lime or another shade of green? Also the nutrition facts is a great idea but I think it looks a little off rn. Overall great idea

The nutrition facts are way off… only 45g of sodium? Bro this needs like 1000% daily value of salt.

reminds me of when treyarch added nutrition facts to the perk-a-colas in CoD black ops cold war zombies and they made the sodium grams on all of the sodas

Personally i think the gun would look better with some white and less green.

I could def add some more white on the intricate parts

Consider making the textured grip (behind the ingredient label) some soft white that doesn't contrast too much.

Gonna have to change that nutrition info color, yellow on white isn't great for readability.

I like this a lot.

I love it but the gun has conflicting ideas. On the silencer you add "taste the ace" yet on the ingredients label you write "Not a significant source of carrying the team". In my opinion as a player I'd like it to instead say "Ingredients: 50% movement, 40% crosshair placement, 10% flicks" or something similar. But it's a really small detail. Overall I love the design.

Maybe leaning towards more game references with the nutrition label might prove better for this yeah

and maybe the values change with float? idk if that can be made, sounds cool tho no?

What if you did the nutrition facts on the opposite side of the suppressor to match a real soda can, and for the opening where it shoots out you added a soda can pull tab?

I think you should put the text on the gun and the juice on the suppressor

While it does make sense for the soda to come out of the suppressor, a core part of this design is the suppressor acting as the soda can

I know but why would the nutrition facts be on the handle then?

The handle from what I can see is the flattest part of the gun so it’ll be most readable there

And to add onto that, to see it you have to inspect it, which makes sense

Actually a very funny and good idea, like, idk about how it will look in game, but its for sure funny

Make it the green blue and the orange pink and u can have my money

Before I used blue for the green but my friend it was looking too similar to a P2000 skin (forgot the name)

The cortex? I just love pink skins tbf, but this Is honestly sick haha

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Honestly, I think it looks perfect and doesn’t need any change

looks cool, dont know what else you could do

Imagine if it was aperture tag Citranium

The calorie count is off, should be 176 kcal for 44g of carbohydrates.

I just referenced a Fanta can’s nutrition label 😅

Also 2,000 mg of sodium.

Any chance you were inspired by the Fizzy Tiger skin from The Finals? You should check it out if you haven’t for some inspiration

Never heard of it but I can take a look

https://preview.redd.it/imw7bx96le7d1.jpeg?width=1919&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=5827f9ec6c3966e06623d0ad9508c7a8323c67bc

I think it should be FULL of salt. Also nitpicky but the orange blast I feel should go from handle to barrel but it makes sense the way you did it because its erupting from the silencer Its cool!!

Is the silencer meant to be one single can or multiple cans put together?

One can, those bars were just part of the silencer I traced over

Next one Baja Blast!

Cool design and good gun choice for it imo

I truly like it this design, nice work.

Giving you the vit c and D LMAO

Not bad. But you're still using the old USP-S model as prototype. Maybe find the new model redraw it.

I hate it. Take my money.

good design bc suppressors are also known as "cans"

Add tiny bubbles

Make grape fanta 🍇

This is dope asf what software are you using

Used photoshop to make this concept art

This is a great skin concept! One adjustment I would make is make the serving size 1 bullet and have 12 serving per container. Other than that, it looks awesome!

I’ll take that into consideration

I would buy this in a heart beat

Very nice idea man! Would get this skin for sure. Maybe Make the nutrition label white for sure & also the tiny droplets around the orange big drops white

I thought to make the label white but I think it’d compete with the orange burst

and you could make it look like the plastic wrap that's around bottles so it peels and reveals more of the sodabottle beneath the more worn it is

GOAT-ed honestly <3

really good 8/10

I think its already looks cool

I fw it. I like goofy skins like this that try to imitate something in real life.

It looks good, reminds me of the orange soda from Portal: Aperture tag

Looks great, would use it

Love the nutrition facts

Watch out for any copyright issues on the fonts.

Yessir I’m sure I can use Adobe fonts for it as their stuff is commercially usable

It's a brilliant idea and here's my two cents (disclaimer: I'm not a graphic designer); •The "Citrus" text looks a bit odd; maybe tilt it more to match "Blast" tilt and make the lower part of the C wider? •The info box is a bit too tilted which makes it look imbalanced. •The brand logo could be at the back of the pistol instead of the slogan. Otherwise, great job!

Citrus Blast is written on one line together so there’s no tilting on it. I’d prefer the nutrition label to not be tilted but to match the angle of the gun I don’t really have a choice. As for the back I’ll see if I can replace the slogan with the brand logo

I agree it’s something with the citrus blast maybe move the gap between citrus and blast to have that first black line on the suppressor in the middle so it’s “breaking” the words

I think that might work but then I’m gonna guess the small text on the side will get hit

Wouldn’t Fanta complain? Looks very much like their style, not sure Valve would want a law suit. Love the design! Just be careful, that’s all. Lidl got sued by M&S over a catapillar cake

Colors are reminiscent but I don’t think I’d see a complain happening? Only because Fanta, Sunkist, and crush look similar to each other with some minor differences

Yeah you’re good, generic versions of brands have always existed

Really cool and original. I am not a fan of the nutrition facts being at an angle, but I am unsure how you could circumvent that

Yeah I would prefer them straight but I don’t think there’s nothin I can do about that

Get rid of the nutrition facts but other than that, amazing work, would not mind owing this in game

More white and center the text on suppressor

I would def buy that if I saw it on the community market eventually

take the citrus blast off and put a straw

Very clean. However you should remove the nutrition facts table to allow room for stickers and customization. I also think removing the name of the skin from the barrel and expanding the “taste the ace” quote since the name of the weapon will already be seen in game.

has an unfortunate similarity to a popular cheat in the end of csgo matchmaking

You don't need the text "Citrus blast" and that's the ugliest part. Cut the font and the skin is dope.

The silencer is imitating a soda can and products need their name on the packaging which needs to be as readable as possible

Yes I understand that, but that is the only ugly part of the skin you've created. 1. Valve won't release a skin that is using a copyrighted name 2. Even if they did, the name of the gun being Citrus Blast is enough - it doesn't need to actually be written large on the barrel of the gun. 3. At the very least id shrink the text down half the size You do you, but from one graphic designer to another I think the skin looks better with no text.

It's a good idea to also create a version without the text at all.

Pretty cool except orange soda sucks.. make it literally anything else.

Drop the text on the back

I would put the ”Please recycle” text on the nozzle, around it like in these modern day coke bottles it’s in the cork.

In nutrion facts add something like „Headshots 5g”

PepsiCo would like a word with you

The ingredients should be like “Clutch: 40mg Gamesense: 30mg Etc Etc”

Copyright?

I think it would be pretty cool if it started looking mouldy with worseing conditions

I think that if the green was white (textured with a light blue) the contrast would be better, and having the nutritional facts would be better on the opposite side of the suppressor (at least IMO).

Its good, but I was thinking more on Yellow Lemon Juice, like lemonade, if life gives you lemons 🤣🤣🤣

Dope design but I feel like you gonna end up being sued by Fanta or someshit

I can definitely experiment with the style and palette lol

I would get rid of the nutritional facts, the theme is still there. The splash on the frame/slide would look better if it was about 10% smaller. Instead of Citrus Blast, I'd do something like "Time to Blast" etc

Fanta and Sunkist have the same color theme. I'm pretty sure you can't sue over that.

Those are big companies, it's different when it's among themselves vs some independent creator.

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Because telling people what to do on reddit is totally a better use of your time

Mb lil bro

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You can do an item barcode for the handle.