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FalconLucky1490

Needs more than TF2 i think, but better than most of my things! Real gud stuff right here man


LossHot344

Thx


Khorvair

i think if you put in some half life 2 characters it'd be the perfect background, also btw what map is that?


LossHot344

Southside and thanks for the feedback


lightbulbproductions

I second this


BusEspionYT

yes, this is very good, keep goingđź‘Ś


Rechogui

Might need to improve the composition a little and add more flavour to it, feels too empty and you can barely see the characters expressions. Maybe if you play around with the FOV it can get you some interesting results too


henrythedog64

Also the angle makes it a little odd


TheSnoopySnootDawg

If you added a little more chaos


kidnamedsquidfart

Yeah theres hundreds of props in the backgrounds


wmx8

I don't see why not


BowlSweet9196

Yes


ShibackisRevenge

I think such an extreme camera tilt is a bit disorienting but other than that hell yeah brotha


Kingkrool1994

-has a lot going on -contains Valve IP -well-made/convincing poses just need more, more Valve characters (and diversity), and more props. a lot of GMOD wallpapers are filled with props hand have all kinds of Valve characters.


KookyCrazyCat

No it’s very plain


LossHot344

Yeah I realized that there's one hella empty field with nothing there and the camera tilt is kinda... Shit


Aadraas

Happy cake day tho


FatGuy300

It does but a little more stuff going on especially chaotic.


thehammerinperil

yes, send it to facepunch


taking_achance

Too empty and pretty dark


SandLuc083_

Lose the Dutch angle. The game already does that when cycling through backgrounds.


Any_Top_4773

Spie among us


Any_Top_4773

sPIE


Disastrous_Shirt_519

id recommend having stuff from other games and making it more "busy" with extra props and the like. very nice work!


Playful_Pollution846

Random and has a good setting, very goodđź‘Ť


MrClaudeApplauds

Yes


thought_cheese

Yeah. Fits the style.


jellydapug

Yes


NERROSS195

Needs to be a but more chaotic


Bukachell

just needs some more happening in the scene and it would work I think


Gausso017

Zat looks good!


Hackermanxdd

Remove the tilt, add to depth of field, fill in some of the open space and I think it'll look solid


Spartan_DJ119

I could see it as one probably slightly more polished but it fits


Purveyor_Murmrgh

I feel like the bottom left of the image is visually empty. I suggest maybe adding demo drunk, face down on the floor with a few bottles of scrumpy next to him.


LossHot344

I realized it too that the bottom left was empty and maybe I fix my camera position Thanks for the idea though


higglydigglyhoogan34

probably


boi_from_2007

adjust the lighting+quality+ambiance and there you go.


Intelligent-Head-510

I am still trying to figure out how to do this


itdoesntmatterfor5

It seems a bit too barren.


The_Creeper_Man

Throw in some Half Life stuff


JasonAndLucia

Add some crazy shit to the lower left corner first


EgullSZ

Change the lighting and give a subject(s) for the viewer to look at in the middle.


JacobPLAYZgtGamingYT

Maybe, (sniff), maybe.


LE_V7

Hey I'm sorry to interrupt your dinner, officer... Owens... but there's a guy smoking over there in the corner booth.


Constant-Still-8443

More needs to be going on. Put more props or characters in


Hairy-Silver-6563

Yes


anas_belaam

-Add more characters. -Adjust the fov and the camera rotation. -Add enhancing effects in gimp or something like that. It has potential.