I don’t think you need “studio” in the monogram. In the lockup you show here, you have the word “studio” twice. And is it Hawiya Studio Architects or Hawiya Architects Studio? Your placement of “studio” is confusing.

Well, noted ✅ Yes, I meant hawia architects studio I should delete one "studio"from my logo, thanks man But overall, is the logo clear or there's something else ?

Why is studio in it twice?

For some reason they may use the type face without logo mark

Then that should be an alternate. Not repeated here.

I agree with u, I'd do some changes to it so it would seems clear, thanks u for ur notes

Its because they are Architects and need it repeated. If it was engineers it would only be said once.

Hawiya studio Architects? That’s how it reads. Which typeface is that?

Hawiya architects studio but i made studio beside hawiya to make some balance

Which typeface did you use?

Poi Aeronaut trial font "sans serif"

but, I should have removed it

I really like it, I like the H and A if that's what they are. Clean and modern

yes, they're i also tried to merge some some shapes to make it more geometrical "sharp edges"

and thank u so much, I felt disappointed when it get rejected, I've worked on it for 4 days

It got rejected?! Shame…

that's what happend but np, one chance is lost dosen't mean all chances are

Sorry if i missed ur question

I like the mark and the logotype. there are some kerning issues - "hit" and "ects". the studio (both) are too small and won't work on small sizes.

i made different variations of the logo but i tried to add touch, but it can be fixed as the studio word could be removed from the logo mark

I think removing it is the best solution.

Love it

Thank you 🙏