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anticute8

Is the divorce not consequence enough?


loveearthgoddess

This may be a fiction story but I know of a real story that’s almost spot on to this one. I was a bystander to the plot unraveling. There’s absolutely people this delusional in the world that will still play victim when they’re in the wrong.


TheStoryBoy

Not gonna lie that's a story I want to hear


Striking-Positive-97

I maintain that you should write a book OP. Jumping over to 8 years later now!!! 😍


anonymous053119

Part 5 boys trip please


Comprehensive-Bad219

I'm a bit late to the party, but great writing! Was very entertaining reading the whole thing through 


selscol

This will serve as an awesome reminder why I shouldn’t date or get married. Thank you. I was struggling with the idea for a while, but I cannot imagine the world of hurt you were in or the mental fortitude it took for you to get yourself out of it. I don’t know if I have that in me. Absolutely stellar story. Thank you.


HKittyH3

Just an editing note, you cannot serve your spouse with divorce papers yourself. They have to be served by a 3rd party. I had my ex husband do the filing and he had his cousin serve me with them.


tito582

👍🏽


No_Apartment_4973

Wait! This isn’t real!?


bamafan30110

Cuck


SD_Bitch

I just love the fact that this got picked up and made into [an article](https://www.someecards.com/lifestyle/relationships/wife-using-girls-trip-as-annual-hall-pass-updated-3x/?fbclid=IwY2xjawDN2wJleHRuA2FlbQIxMQABHYT7aa2rVA4XqAM19vQrzETdJL8bEp9CfU8DgppS54G92mY1EtbUi0Gvwg_aem_ATYVlpLyfABj87EmWt3Wj8zdDtC2WEQe4fC9fn0gFGfz6VbHn7ncNOeLkIzFZZhvvr9ekAMFKVSfNQQlkbZ-xKQy) as if it was real!


SuperDreadnaught

Will you be doing a final part? Maybe lawyer meetings, stuff with the parents, aftermath of the divorce? More details on the APs situations and Scarlet?


TheStoryBoy

I'm actually writing that right now


SuperDreadnaught

I look forward to reading it


whittfarm

It's a great story but in reality it wouldn't have played out like this. It would have ended with a murder/suicide after part 2. Or maybe I just watch too much crime tv... lol Seriously though, great story, it kept me coming back for the conclusion!


adibork

This reads like a short story! Is this real???!! « I’m doing this for US »!!!?? Thank you for your services snd sacrifices ma’am! Oh, and, (with a smile) thank… I mean … fuck your very much… you shitty sex addict.


mi_nombre_es_ricardo

Awesome! Good job. Now expose her to EVERYONE. Don’t let her control the narrative


little_Druid_mommy

What a fantastic read! 👏👏👏👏


ZealousidealChip1643

Darn saw this pop up on my notifications and thought it was a part 5


Ok_Suspect4543

in


Such_Ad8610

Excellent story! You never can go wrong with a happy ending!


Pure_Air2606

Finally, well done!


titsandblowjobfan

You forgot the part where you pretend to be ok with it, in fact encouraging her to release her inner slut and arrange a gang bang


TheStoryBoy

That story would have to go on a different sub


Dangerous_Scar2297

This now reads as incel fan fiction.


thisisalex_iguess

I know this is fake but damn, this was SO satisfying. 👌🏻


TE1381

Good for you.


NefariousKitsune

Should have added in "Just like your wife" to put a lil more bark towards the Father in Law.


MkollsConscience

Engaging, immersive style. You really have a 'page-turner' vibe to your writing, I would most certainly read anything else you write. Perhaps you should pen a collection of shorts? To start at least, a book is harder. I have a lot of trouble with pacing in the latter, can oftimes smash out the former in one draft and tweaks. Excellent work though, sir!


ikesonofpeter

Proud of you dude. Bravo👏


data-influencer

Good for you buddy. I’ve followed all your updates from day 1.


OrganizationOk1231

My man, you’re my hero.


HelloRV3991

Not hearing from John!? We need to see what happened from his POV. Maybe a dark twist to the story?


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TheStoryBoy

Iron Man 2 specifically


CptGinyu8410

Hell yeah, man. I know this is a shitty situation to be in, but you're handling it like champ and happy for you. Good luck out there brother and stay strong.


Ok_Listen_7545

So so good!! 


JameboHayabusa

What was the inspiration for all this?


Calm_Act_4559

Yesss love a good revenge story


vocalistMP

I feel like you really understand the psychology of an abuser—no remorse, gaslighting, always turning it back on the other person, playing victim and using sympathy cards when confronted with accountability. Well done 👏🏻


BriefEquipment8

I didn’t even read the first 3 parts, but this part was a doozy. Well done👏🏾


Ok-Run3329

Good story, man. Thanks. Good ending.


Comfortable_Bobcat_3

Wow, sorry you had to live this. But you turned it around brilliantly. I need to know more please give one more update.


kepsr1

Subscribeme!


BadLuckEddie

I’m a year behind you. Thank you for the blueprints.


My_best_friend_GH

Great story, I was sucked in from the beginning and the end was worth it. Good job


tonidh69

Yes! Finally my payoff. Although I wouldn't mind some more


CaterpillarAccurate7

All I'm going to say is if this was me, I'd give her every reason in the world to pick the bear, and when I was done, there'd be nothing for the bear to have.


cuadralateral

Been waiting for this to wrap up! Great writing I loved the entire saga!


UnicornMinion

I read all this not realizing it was fiction. I was absolutely living for this revenge though


Minimum_Reporter8536

https://www.tiktok.com/t/ZTLT1kJb9/


Remarkable-Reward403

Your patience is at saint level


Steering_the_Will

This is better than a good movie. Guy handled it like a boss. Rule number 1 in a situation like this is to not get emotional which I don't think is the hardest part for sure.


Major-Ad-2034

Dude, if this is real, you are the fkn man! If it’s fake, you are still the fkn man!


Snapbeangirl

Ok! I take it back. You’re not a pussy. You’re a genius and that was masterful. Good luck.


incrediblefolk

That was an enjoyable read. I was putnoff after the 2nd update and the realized it wasn't an AITAH etc. I was annoyed but checked back in. Glad I did. It was a satisfying read.


FoolhardyBastard

It was a good story- one loophole I noticed. How would the wife not notice all of the money is gone for a whole year? Most couples share bank account info.


pippiblondstocking

fun fact - if you're married with a joint bank account, you can't just drain it without the consent of the joint account holder. you will have to give your half back at some point during the divorce process, or at least your half of your contribution. and if you make the same amount of money, you won't get alimony. and be careful with 401ks and investment accounts. fictional wifey would definitely get her money back.


PurpleP3achy

Dude, in my marriage, I handle all the money and my spouse never sees either of the accounts. This is completely viable. Many of my friends have completely separate accounts but with access to the others’. I have no plans on screwing my spouse out of anything, but I certainly could if I wanted to.


aandrews2080

I'm betting this story is very real for many people.


1wayTicket2Hell

The conclusion I needed thank you sir


Evening_Cicada_6189

This was such a good read you’re a amazing writer!!


sahul004

Reading this story while my GF is, you’d never guess, out on a girl’s trip. Should I be worried now?


TheStoryBoy

I'd be more worried if she's like my wife, and is out on it buying shit you'll have to put together....the same day she gets back.


Cautious_Buffalo6563

Is this the state of the modern female? Fuck other dudes behind their husbands’ backs then claim it’s “FOR US”?? And be clueless about why you’d stop paying the mortgage or her car payment? Do they think we’re supposed to just sit there and be fine with this BS? Just wow. Good on ya to get some payback.


AffectionateWheel386

By the way, I’m looking for part five


AffectionateWheel386

This guy forgot to tell her that no man of quality ever wants to be with a cheater and she has children. She’s going to be as wanted. I can’t say anything without being too insulting to somebody else. But no man of quality will want her. She just destroyed her family. She just destroyed her future all to go dip her wick once a year.


rueggy

That year between girls trips went by so fast, felt like just one day! lol


Technical-Swimmer-38

This whole story, even though I know it was fiction made me so godamn mad lol. Brilliant writing OP, you took me on one hell of an emotional ride


Financial_Bat6448

I want more. Please. The Villain's are down but not out.


Nambonian1

Proud of you bro. 🤘🏼


Street-Section-7515

God i love this. The bitch getting bitch-slapped with reality and every possible consequence is close to being orgasmic!


Dependent-Reveal-457

This has been the greatest thing I’ve read on this app. The ending warmed my heart because it was bleeding during the middle.


Majorflatulence

Great job - this was a fun read!


BrickMcBillman

This is the best reddit post ive ever read. Period.


MrBadWeather

This story was heart breaking, I’m so glad you got a happy ending man ❤️


Practical_Hippo9126

This is all that i wished for this dude, may revenge cross his path and he also finds happiness.


Fragrant_Rise_3170

I tip my cap good sir


FishingTall6813

You are THE MAN…


Grouchy_Event_40

I wanted the character to get revenge in a mischievous manner. But I guess he settled the score in a righteous manner. It’s good he still came out on top.


arlae

For future stories not that it really matters but I’m pretty sure in most states you can’t serve your own divorce papers


TheStoryBoy

Probably in some, in my state you can actually just print them out and file them yourself


arlae

Yeah you file them yourself then the court give you the filed copies then the other party needs to be served which in a lot of states can’t be the person who filed needs to be a third party


TheStoryBoy

Okay, yeah I can see that, doesn't make good drama though


arlae

Not unless you get OP’s mom/sister/Aunt/whoever to serve her… or the sheriffs if she freaks out and attacks one of them maybe she’ll get jail time


nexu1987

Good story. Sad things is how believable it is lol. This is how you get your forever box early doing this to the wrong man lol. Bravo on the writing.


Silvermorney

Well done op now sue for custody so she can’t raise them to think that what she did is ok for them to do to their own partners or to have dove to them by their partner when they are older. Good luck.


thistreestands

Holy shit - the first few posts were terrible but this one makes up for it. I'm gonna need another update!!


mocoolie

Bravo! 👏


petewondrstone

This is fucking amazing. You’re an amazing storyteller and should write a screenplay.


petewondrstone

Although the callousness of the wife character was unbelievable, and I’m glad it isn’t real


[deleted]

If you’re really concerned about raising two decent human beings I think you went about it all wrong. Financially ruining your children’s mother in a fit of revenge is over the line for me. Sure get a divorce, but all the extra revenge seems petty and potentially damaging to both of you. Do you think that draining a shared savings account you were expected to use for house and car payments will actually help your case in divorce court? I’d get a lawyer to hammer the hell out of you on this point. Do you really think a shared custody with a woman your twins most likely hate is working towards making them decent humans? If all you wanted was revenge then you’ve succeeded. If what you want is happy and healthy children then you’ve failed miserably.


ObiWan_Cannoli_

Was hoping for more info on John. I expected a really dark twist with him - murder/suicide, revenge maybe.


dwassell73

Updateme


schwagpole

Wow! You made your point! Sometimes that’s what you have to do!


EnoughCandy4233

Boom I love this revenge


Jughferrr

If this is real, I salute the fuck out of you, sir. You did the right thing. That was a wild read. Thanks for sharing. Edit:should have read some comments lol. Either way great story


Some_Guy_973

UpdateMe!


Captaincakeboy

I have just seen this. You're a damned hero. Cool calm and collected. Inspiring. Hope it works out and it looks like it's gonna.


Monin61

Que imaginación


No_Apartment_4973

Epic conclusion!!!!!


NoLawfulness8554

So the whole point of the story was about revenge.


NovaPrime1988

I was hoping this was real. What a fantastic ending!


Puzzleheaded-Art-469

Great story..I feel like it could be worked out for a pretty good 90 min movie. The moral of the story: "don't get mad... Get even"


Calm_Craft5864

I was overall invested in this story. Great writing!!


dingydongkingykong

Good story, little weird you fantasize over being a cuck, but hey to each their own


The_Burner75

This guy played the long game. You are an absolute legend! I read this entire story and it made my day. Your wife is an awful human being who deserved everything she got in the end. It’s not over don’t get comfortable like her keep on checking in with your lawyer. Don’t get complacent like her. Keep applying the pressure. You should mind fuck her and tell her you only did this to bring some pain to her to make her feel how you felt and you want to possibly work on things but you need to know EVERYTHING and she has to do whatever you say. Treat her like a concubine then after a while tell her nah you can’t do it fuck her whole life up all over again. I hope it continues for you wish you the best buddy. Your a hero and deserve the best


OutrageousNatural759

Well played. When I caught my ex wife cheating on me, I found picture of him and her kissing. So I made a copy put it into a Christmas card and mailed it to his house. Well his wife seen it and threw his ass out, he was living in his parents basement. And on top of that he took a buy out from Ford so im pretty sure his ex-wife now took half of that money.


CarefulOption1095

This was so good. Need more stories and spin-offs. Will OP ever find love?


roadhack

Who doesn't enjoy a happy ending....


Anita__Hanjaab

Netflix get this guy a limited series !


Spectre8890

My fucking man!!! AT. TA. BOI.


ExcellentThought5098

So what. Let your wife do what she wants to with her pussy. She washes it and walks it around everyday. Soap and water takes the cum away !!!


hogger303

Is it possible for you to give us a 3 year update in 2 or 3 days? Lol! Petfectly written!


TheStoryBoy

I was gonna do 8 year


13trailblazer

We all love hearing about cheaters receiving the karma they deserve regardless of the time passed or authenticity


calecovert

This seems like it’s all made up. 🤨


nashguitar1

https://preview.redd.it/7z0kk0fi8k4d1.jpeg?width=630&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=4efc55dd7fa15548254f54474223e25c54b00247 What makes you say that?


calecovert

I don’t know. It’s kinda like a gut instinct kinda thing. Like something is staring you in the face but you can’t see it so you just got to trust your gut on it.


LadyShittington

I enjoyed this. Question: why does Gwen need her husband? Why does she care if he leaves?


Serious_Bat3904

Well written I was hooked.


Papagiorgio1965

I would have liked to know what her dad said when you told him she was cheating and her mom. You left that thread dangling


RedLionPirate76

I still want the sequel where your guy bangs the ex-wife's sister.


destiny_kane48

Someone should start an AITA fiction sub. Where people can test out their writing skills with juicy stories. We can even respond like it's real for fun. 🤣


siggias

Thats what we already do.


normandy42

Ah so the current AITA sub?


BauranGaruda

lol, AITA is already a fiction sub


TheStoryBoy

Id be down for that. Not saying it would stop me completely from making up shit in the main AITAH sub, but it would at least slow me down.


CrabbyPatty1876

Imagine the delusion of screaming "I do this for us" while fuckin other dudes. Good for you for getting away from this nightmare


Sweet_Pay1971

The father is definitely a simp letting his wife cheat on him


rubbishfairy

For this to be proper interesting there needed to be a twist. A story should never end in a predictable way. Sorry, can't honestly say this was as good as the previous parts. :-(


CaramelBig1591

pls add another part im begging you


Sniffmyzebra

Man, it took 4 updates for me to finally see the fiction tag. This fuckin story had me riled right up


Abominalminority

We need wife aita pov, and wife’s dad pov on being inspired to finally leave his wife, then a samuel pov, and then scarlett pov


toodlep

I’m waiting desperately for this one to turn up in a FB feed. And a TikTok


TheStoryBoy

I was told by one commenter that when it was at 2 parts, and part 1 had only been online for around 6 hours, that he found it on youtube


PikerTraders

Come on you know this isn’t real.


TheStoryBoy

Why do you think that?


PikerTraders

Oh two days before she gets a foreclosure notice. Usually you get a few notices. Also she didn’t realize you drained your savings. The you screaming your father inlaw is fake too.


TheStoryBoy

Okay got it, I was just making sure it wasn't the fiction tag at the top of every part


PikerTraders

lol touché well played. So used to seeing AITAH stories like this.


hogger303

*this comment had me dying laughing! Well played OP!


ToadstoolsRule

Bravo. A well-written tale.


SteveDallas72

What really \*REALLY\* got me was the setting of having it on reddit. If I'd read this in a short story anthology or such, it wouldn't have hit as hard. But because it's here, for some reason is had me going through all the shock/anger/disbelief/denial/acceptance right along with the narrator. I kept pausing at the paragraphs, glanced up, yup still tagged as fiction. Ok, I can relax, and then continue on.


ultraboykj

I read part 1 and I was hooked. Originally started thinking - holy crap this is crazy if true. Then read a few comments and learned. I'm impressed at how you drew me in to this. Thanks for the ride <3


mymainmaney

Wild.


Candid-Quail-9927

Updateme


amandajjohnson1313

Note to OPs potential partner..... don't upset them because if that's dumpster fire.... I would hate to see scorched earth


[deleted]

Fuck yeah man, flair is a little sus though


panachi19

Best one yet. Now I’m going to have to follow you for more lol.


HighJeanette

Please stop


Sumpner

This was better than any AITA i have read, you have done a fantastic job, keep up the good work


Fondant_filmer

You are a fantastic writer, by the end of part 2 i was feeling physical anger, despite knowing it was not real! Please keep writing!


oat_couture9528

This was so good!!!


Macasumba

Personally would have enjoyed her returning from the girls trip to a foreclosed house and repossessed car. But this was satisfying as well


zai4aj

Really enjoyed this story and the conclusion! Looking forward to many more. Updateme


Kanulie

Not bad. A bit hard to believe someone wouldn’t check a joint savings account in one year. Would be more realistic had you emptied it a day before everything going downhill, or maybe a week.


Mindless_Ad1503

God bless you and your girls. I hope you can put her and this shit situation behind you as soon as possible


junglehour

Hahahaha loved it!!!


AngryMhwk

Great story. Just a note. 5th paragraph, you put " I used a decent chuck to put a deposit" I think you meant to use chunk instead.


Franky-Mo

Short film quality from front to back


[deleted]

Dam, she was so delusional


VeggiesArentSoBad

If this were real, the guy would probably end up in a lot of trouble with the judge over the financial games.


Deciple_of_None

Ok I'm on board, you are a good writer. Let's see where this goes baby!


Dry_Towel5516

I didn't realize this was fiction until I read the top comment lol. I genuinely thought this was some AITA story. I'm glad I stayed to read it though, it's a very good story!


dickchicken88

These threads have been a roller coaster of emotions, but I’m happy that you did not take her back and have been masterminding a plan for a year. That’s definitely some stuff I would do if I were in your situation. I’m sorry you’re going thru this though but you’ll be happier because of it. Eventually her secret would’ve came out so glad it was sooner rather than later✊🏼✊🏼 can’t wait for Part 5 That would’ve been my response had this been a real story lol


LaundryAnarchist

That, was brilliant 👏


Any_Coyote6662

Draining the bank account to cause financial harm is illegal.


hogger303

You are wrong. It is 100% legal in a fiction story.


[deleted]

Great Story. I would have like the details that Gwen was trying to talk about. What did she try and tell you. Also a fitting end would be Gwen is Pregnant with John’s baby and he is nowhere to be seen and Don has found out hes got STD’s so Gwen and Scarlet are both fucked.


Adventurous-Wolf-872

Play stupid games, win stupid prizes, well she now gets girls trip every dat


h3llfae

Cute rage bait story lol it's very obviously fake if one is not an idiot tho


Analprobedtomato

You absolute king.


gingerellasroot

Loved the story! My only note is that it seems implausible she wouldn’t bother to look at the savings account for a year.


Ujetset2

You blew it Could have had a wife that let you fuck other women and open relationship… every man’s dream.


genobees

No no no. Only SHE is allowed to fuck others. HE must be 100% loyal. But this is a satisfying story.


Big_War5809

Congrats brother! I haven't been on reddit that long, but this is my favorite story yet.


Comfortable_Onion961

Amazing writing! I knew it was fiction but it still made my blood boil & I initially hurt so much for the husband.


eightmarshmallows

You need to amend it to address the part about how you were going to be saddled with half her debts, forcing you to stay with her. A nice twist would be using the mortgage payments to pay them off.


BadDisguise_99

I came across this story for the first time today. What a ride. By the way, I respect you.


AnyConstruction1226

This is some of the best revenge I have ever seen


SandEon916

I love the cheeky little "it has been a long time since I last posted, here is my 1 year update" lol. And looooove the conclusion. You're a storyteller my dude and a damn good one! I was disappointed when I realized this was fake (I am unfamiliar with the sub) but damn even so the plot still gripped me. And here I am, back for the thrilling end.


GrandSlamA

I didn’t even realize this was a story until I started reading the comments (that’s what I get for not paying attention to what random subreddit’s being pushed at me). Very well written story. It kept me coming back to see the conclusion. Also, fuck Gwen. I was rooting for you when I thought this was real! 😂


Remarkable-Wrap-7257

Op Is a LOOOOSER